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I REALLY need gay opinion on this story!!?
It's a short story for my college writing class... what i need to know is if the relationship is realistic... Yea, I'm gay, but I'm closeted and wouldn't really know the dynamics of this kind of relationship Props to all who actually read it!!!!!
Public Comments
- Wow... this is a novel. You should really be writer!
- Please become a writer.
- GREAT!!!! You kept the attention of the reader by showing the detail of the setting. Really very good. Send it to Awesomedude.com as see if they will epublish it on their site as a short. Really very good.
- It is good, but it gets a little rambly at some points. Probably a lot better then I could do though. The relationship sounds realistic enough. Good job.
- you don't worth it.
- Uhhhmazing!! :D I loved it.
- Its a decent read. You have great control over the amount of detail you put in this story without it crossing to pointless detail. Very realistic portrayal of a relationship between friends although after he came out it began to lose some of its realism. sometimes you also tend to ramble. good story, for sure you will get at the very least a B
- excellent imagery it's very realistic so you've done well to write it thanks for sharing
- I'm a gay with not a lot of time.. but hey! Bravo for the amount of your post!
